I looked back at my older submissions and cringed.
Comments and critique are welcome.
Be gentle ♥


WeightColdness all around silence, deafening silence body feels weightless, heart feels heavy the light is growing dim as the water begins to fill the lungs heart is pounding in the ears, hands are reaching for the world above legs and arms ache and become numb lungs scream and ears drums ring suddenly a hand, air and light the darkness is gone and abyss is behindWeight


Fallen Heart Ver IIMy body ached and felt heavy, everything seemed to burn and hurt. All around me were unfamiliar sounds and smells. I could feel cool wind gently blowing over me as it rustled through the trees. The sound of birds singing in the distance and the rumble of a far away storm. I tired to shift my body but was met with pain as if a limb coming out of sleep.Fallen Heart Ver II
Pins and needles stung throughout my body halting my movement momentarily. I sat with my weight on my knees, my head facing the sky above. Warmth poured in all around me contrasting the coolness of the water below. I dared a peek of my new surroun


hoursI am incomplete when you are far The heart does not sing and the sky is dim Silently sitting watching the world creep by It is the thought of your warm and smiling face Which lets slumber finally comehours
Clouds
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"He died as he lived: draped in the arms of another man."
9 out of 10 guys like girls with big boobs. The tenth one likes the other nine.
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My anti-drug
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"Hello darkness my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, because a vision softly creeping left its seeds while I was sleeping and the vision that was planted in my brain still remains within the sound of silence."
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"Hello darkness my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, because a vision softly creeping left its seeds while I was sleeping and the vision that was planted in my brain still remains within the sound of silence."
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"Hello darkness my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, because a vision softly creeping left its seeds while I was sleeping and the vision that was planted in my brain still remains within the sound of silence."
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I see a difference... Do you ?
_Les jeux de mots dans l'humour, c'est comme les genoux!
_Pas faux...
_Je suis quouasiment sur que nous avons affaire à un serial killer ...
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"Hello darkness my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, because a vision softly creeping left its seeds while I was sleeping and the vision that was planted in my brain still remains within the sound of silence."
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